a stronger shot would have seen her head tilted to HER left (our right), and also i would have considered surface blurring the neck line as well.. you can not see lines/blemishes in her face, but you can in her neck... however you should preserve impurities such as freckles etc...

great shot though! i really do like it. i cant wait til i can get my models in!

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ohh thats really nice! nice chooise of model, but saying that the model don't matter when you take pictures and use the surounding in such a way, as demonstrated in your random people pictures

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thank you

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Who's she by the way?

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Apsogi photo Teleios o fotismos kai poly oraia kai zesti photo Bravo ... Keep it up

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very nice photo...I love it

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don't like the fact that you cut her feet.. try not to cut you're models... it's rude so from this point of view I would advise putting her feet back...
and concerning the composition even further... the center of the image moves towards the left of the picture... which is really nice `cause that makes the viewer focus on the eyes even more... so from this point of view I would advise cutting her feet even more... (eh, it's just a picture, it won't hurt)
Concerning the lighting... you made her out of plastic... she ain't real... hair looks plastic to... but her neck seems human... that's why I advise either to add more lightning from below... make her whole plastic... or... since the center is moving to the left... put the lightning from the right... so it would balance the composition...
Hope it was helpful...

oh... and btw... GREAT JOB

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A great photograph.

I hope this model knows she has her entire life to grow up.

thank you

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